I forgot to write about the evaluator's comments regarding my Speech number 9 because I'm just too excited to post the speech. Haha! I have to put it here so I won't forget the recommendations and suggestions given to me. I'll be delivering my 'Graduation Speech' for Toastmasters in two weeks time and I still have no topic in mind. Okay, I have ideas but my mind is too jumbled right now. I make great speeches when I cram them. (Pfft that doesn't sound good hehe). Think. Think. Think. I better graduate in Toastmasters before my grad school term starts (yiiiiiiiiiiiii this is it. it's final. I'm going to write a separate post about it later hehe). So, below are the comments from my evaluator:
1. In order to persuade people, you have to be likeable. You possess that quality. You are very likeable. The moment you stepped infront and started talking, the audience immediately got hooked with what you are saying. *turned red in embarrassment. I'm way toooo flattered to say anything but 'thank you' haha*
2. Also, in order to persuade people, you have to share yourself. You did a great job in sharing yourself. Few people will go infront and talk about her boyfriend and share their conversations. We had fun listening to those funny stories. You are naturally funny and I especially admire your humor and writing ability.
3. Since it's a persuasive speech, you have to have a call for action in the end. Also, veer away from the podium and use the stage. Next time, we'll volunteer you as a test speaker so you can practice talking infront of a LARGER crowd. *oohh-oh. haha! yeah the thought of speaking infront of a larger crowd still scares me*
So there. I'm going for 10!!! :D This it.
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